I'm not sure how I feel about vignettes.
-This story is told backwards, is this an effective way to tell it/could you even tell?
(I wanted it to make sense when it was read beginning to end, and not really -feel- like the relationship was regressing but rather you would feel that the two characters were in love the whole time.)
-How does the sin gle-lined part (II) work? I'm on the fence about that one.
-Any other thoughts or comments?