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We walked until our shadows were swallowed up by the darkness. She pressed her palm against mine and I counted three of our breaths before I pressed mine against hers. My blistered feet bled onto the gravel beneath my soles and I could feel waves of hunger crashing against my stomach walls. We stood there, in absolute silence as the lines on our faces were slowly concealed.

And it was beautiful.
:iconxthe-eleanorx:
Basically I wanted to create a disgustingly beautiful scene and then ruin it by stating the obvious. I think I succeeded.

Screw you, it's late. I just wrote ten pages of graphic novel and I can't use it for FFM. Cut me some slack.

On the bright side, I only have to write five more of these.
:iconshyanne-kai:
I feel like you have just trolled me, haha. It was so well written and enrapturing until that last line :XD:
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~xthe-eleanorx Aug 28, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! I'm not all that fond of that last line either...
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