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songs drift slowly
from rooms filled with peeling wallpaper
sometimes i feel you wrapped around my heart
touching places you could never reach before
we have a story
worthy of a best-selling paperback
the kind of story
that's only sad when it belongs to you
i try to intertwine my fingers with yours
but it's not really the same
unless you're there too
I took the title from this list of prompts.

Weak ending is weak.

As always, thoughts and comments are much appreciated. :heart:
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laffinia Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
I like it. Nice and simple.
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xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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:iconlaffinia:
laffinia Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012
welcome
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful. :D
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:iconxthe-eleanorx:
xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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Lottie-Girl Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Welcome :D
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silverwing2822 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
this is lovely. I especially like the line "sometimes I feel you wrapped around my heart"
I disagree, the ending isnt weak, I think its just right.
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:iconxthe-eleanorx:
xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much! :heart:
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TURNIP-SLOP Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like it, personally I found the ending to be the strongest part :)
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xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! :hug:
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