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Carelessly,
she sleeps with the window opened
and the nighttime's sun,
that isn't quite a star,
paints her face and neck
with a strange,
silver glow,
and deposits a burning desire
to absorb it all.
I had a strange thought while trying to sleep last night.

Key word here: trying.
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Concora Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012   Writer
A beautiful thought, rather. I really do like the concept of being 'moonburnt', and this piece does it perfect justice. :heart::heart:
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xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks so much! :heart:
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DMFITTWSFABTWWONEE Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Writer
I like this but I'm not sure really what this means. The key word is always trying though. Also don't take an amateur's critque too seriously.
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xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Writer
It's basically about how nighttime has this cool romantic allure driven by the moon.
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Shyanne-Kai Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
I like the similarities to the sun, but thinking about the moon instead makes it so much more sweeter and beautiful.
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xthe-eleanorx Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
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