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Please Don't Leave Me

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She flutters her fingers over her skin, she smiles as she thinks of him. He only touched her once, and it was when she brushed up against him on the train. She smiles as she remembers the way he muttered an apology. Her heart feels light as her memories play though her mind, changing bit by bit as they pass through.

Please don't leave me.

She rides the train on Tuesday afternoons, because she ran into him once, several Tuesdays ago. She waits patiently at the station, hoping, praying that he will see him. She has the lines worked out in her head, hoping she will have the occasion to use them. She rides the bus day in, day out sitting in the same seat.

Don't leave me—ever.

She sits in her drab little office doing the same mundane tasks every single day. When she allows her mind to wander off, she thinks of him at his own job. He's probably a curator at a museum or something exciting like that. She refrains from doodling his name all over her folder like a thirteen-year-old.

Besides she doesn't even know his name.

You can't leave me.
I don't really know what to think of this. The premise was that I wanted a character who was obsessive to the point of insanity and I think she has been created.

Of course, she doesn't have a name and she rides public transportation all day long.

Some day I will stop being so predictable.
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Darkthrop's avatar
i was at the phone with a friend and imediately after i read the first part of the description, she said (without knowing the text:)) that maybe you talk about me.....hehe:)
anyway, this is awesome.